ARSHI'S THOUGHT ON REALISING THEIR FEELINGS (Written by me)
By Unknown - Tuesday, May 10, 2016
Here I am back with another stupid and small poem with me on how must Arshi have felt on realising their feelings. I have not differentiated their views. Hope you guys will like it ;)
Aankho sei aankhe mili...
Dil shabab ban gaya...
Dhadkan sei dhadkan mili...
Jism dhua ban gaya...
Nafrat to thi dur jaane ke liye...
Par pyaar ki kashish kareeb le aayi kuch iss tarah...
Ki naa dur jaa sake ab...
Aur naa paas aa sake hum...
Ab tu hi bata mere maula...
Ki Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Do?
(When our eyes met...
Our hearts become youth...
When our Heart beats met...
Our body and soul become ashes... (mingling with each other)
Hatred was there to get us apart...
But love has brought us close somehow...
That neither can we part now...
Nor can we be together...
Now you only tell my god...
What Shall I name This Love? )
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U need password for the updates go read them dear....
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Hehehehe..... I understand dear.....There are few reasons why I make the blog password protected... I have decided to make it public if I saw that I will get nice response on blog :) So yepp.....
ReplyDeleteLoved the poem, loved the way the poem portrays their journey of feelings. Regards lily30 from IF
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.LadyHitler./IF
Nice Poems
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Loved the way you portrait their journey in the form of beautiful poem.
ReplyDeletewow...u described their luv beautifully in d poem
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Beautiful dear...
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Great work ..... Beautifully expressed and written ....mindblowing .....amazing .....am fan of ur writing ...I loved such an amazing gesture of your hands and mind
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ReplyDeleteIF(merehan)
lovely poem
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Lovely poem.. Beautiful
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Will pm u on IF dear as soon as I go online. :)
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lovely poem, awesome
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ReplyDeletebeautiful poem dear.....loved it.....can u write poems in english?
ReplyDeleteYes I can..... DTSS ke prologue mei poems English mei hi thi.... :)
ReplyDeleteWhy? Vaise I have given English translation with it :)
Short and sweet...
ReplyDeleteAgar mujhe shayeri Ki s bhi aati toh usi andaaz me ise padh k apne jazbaat bayaan karti 😜
Too much hindi/urdu 😂
Hehehe..... Yaar kuch nahi hota try kar lo kya pata kuch accha likh lo ;)
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nice like it
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Beautiful.............
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